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a.theory.for.chaos by ~syphix:iconsyphix:



.A THEORY FOR CHAOS.

mathematical precision;
lacking the perfection to execute
a perfect incision, a formula
and yet simply a decision.

written upon the skies into dust,
wavelengths depleating distance;
it must draw closer, into
the hands i choose to trust.

spoken into silences, words too pure
to embrace the air, enter the ears.
it instills a cure, a wordplay of
tragedy; endeavours i fail to endure.

this is my theory for chaos.
©2005-2009 ~syphix
:iconsyphix:

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i'm back.
hibernation - yeah, i slept well.

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:iconalwayzdazd:
and a good theory, at that.

written upon the skies into dust,
wavelengths depleating distance;
it must draw closer, into
the hands i choose to trust.

that was just amazing.

--
Am I the star beneath the stairs?

Am I a ghost upon the stage?

Am I your anything?


:iconsto67:
nice enjambement which i really liked heh
"depleating"? minus the 'a'?
nice descriptive poem, very succinct, despite the rhyme being a little old and ordinary. thats pretty much the only thing which sticks out a little in this poem.
:icontragicrabbit:
<33 much love for this poem

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